Sample of mail Shogi analysis

it’s Japanese but you can just copy and paste.

手合割:平手
先手:
後手:
手数—-指手———消費時間–
1 7六歩(77) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
2 3四歩(33) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
3 2六歩(27) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
4 4四歩(43) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
5 2五歩(26) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
6 3三角(22) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
7 4八銀(39) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
8 3二飛(82) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
9 6八玉(59) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
10 4二銀(31) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
11 7八玉(68) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
12 6二玉(51) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
13 5六歩(57) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
14 7二玉(62) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
15 5八金(49) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
16 8二玉(72) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
17 3六歩(37) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
18 5二金(41) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
19 4六歩(47) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
20 7二銀(71) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
21 3七桂(29) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
*nice developing move. You’re playing naturally so far.
22 5四歩(53) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
23 4五歩(46) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
*good. you’re consistent with what you’re doing.
24 同 歩(44) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
25 3三角成(88) ( 0:00/00:00:00)

  • Bx3c+ is a nice move but P5e is a better book move. After that if White plays Px5e, Nx4e and it’s hard for White to maneuver their Bishop.
    26 同 銀(42) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    27 4五桂(37) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *P2d is a candidate move but it doesn’t really work because Sx2d.
    28 4四銀(33) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *R4b Nx3c+ Nx3c P*4g is a possible continuation.
    29 2四歩(25) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *good call. P4f is a natural looking move but that gives White time to prevent P2d with B4b.
    30 4五銀(44) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    31 2三歩成(24) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    32 4二飛(32) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    33 3二と(23) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
  • Nice clearance sacrifice.
    34 同 飛(42) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    35 2一飛成(28) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    36 4二飛(32) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    37 1一龍(21) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    B3c is better. that attacks the Rook and strengthens your King safety.
    38 3三角打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    39 3一龍(11) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    40 9九角成(33) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    41 5三香打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    Great deflection tactic but that was risky. S8h is better and if +B9h, L5c or some other attacking moves. oftentimes, like in the position on move 40, S8h is the best move.
    42 5六銀(45) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    43 5二香成(53) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    B2f was a better move. That protects the Silver on 4h-square and stares into the enemy’s castle.
    44 6六桂打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    45 同 歩(67) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *K6h doesn’t work because Nx5h+ Gx5h Sx6g+.
    46 4八飛成(42) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    47 6八金打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *G*7g was better to keep your escape route of 6h-square.
    48 9八銀打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *This is a common move. It’s a simple move but hard for Black to defend.
    49 5九金(69) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    50 8九馬(99) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    51 6九玉(78) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    52 6七桂打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    53 4八金(58) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    54 7九馬(89) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    55 5八玉(69) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    56 5九桂成(67) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    57 同 玉(58) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    58 6八馬(79) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    59 4九玉(59) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    60 2八金打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    61 7一角打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    Great swindle! White could go wrong with Gx7a and +Rx7a Kx7a G6b K8b Gx7b Kx7b R*6b K7a +L6a
    62 同 玉(82) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    63 6一龍(31) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    64 同 銀(72) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    65 同 成香(52) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    66 同 玉(71) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    67 2一飛打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *You achieved a double attack but now the opponent’s king is kind of safe.
    68 5一金打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    69 2八飛成(21) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    70 4七歩打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    71 同 金(48) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    72 同 銀成(56) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    73 6八龍(28) ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    74 6九飛打 ( 0:00/00:00:00)
    *Overall
    *
    *You were doing great in the opening. I can see you’ve learned some opening theory and tactics!
    *
    *unfortunately, it seems like you weren’t able to maximize your abilities because of your insecure king safety. You took the opponent’s decisive blow out of nowhere and then it became kind of one-sided endgame. But don’t get too disappointed that happens even to strong players when you’re too behind in King safety.
    *
    *to avoid falling victim to opponent’s decisive moves, pay extra attention to your king safety, especially when you develop boat castle against Mino castle. Double checking if you’re overlooking opponent’s attacking moves would be helpful.
    *
    key takeaways from the game are the moves B3c on move 37 and S8h on move 41. These moves are particularly applicable.
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    *If you have any questions about my feedback, you can ask one time only.

I’ll send just my feedback if you want.

On move 21. nice developing move. You’re playing naturally so far.

On move 23. good. you’re consistent with what you’re doing.

On move 25. Bx3c+ is a nice move but P5e is a better book move. After that if White plays P×5e, Nx4e and it’s hard for White to maneuver their Bishop.

On move 27. P2d is a candidate move but it doesn’t really work because Sx2d.

On move 28. R4b Nx3c+ Nx3c P*4g is a possible continuation.

On move 29. good call. P*4f is a natural looking move but that gives White time to prevent P2d with B*4b.

On move 33. Nice clearance sacrifice.

On move 37. B*3c is better. that attacks the Rook and strengthens your King safety.

On move 41. Great deflection tactic but that was risky. S8h is better and if +B9h, L*5c or some other attacking moves. oftentimes, like in the position on move 40, S8h is the best move.

On move 43. B*2f was a better move. That protects the Silver on 4h-square and stares into the enemy’s castle.

On move 45. K6h doesn’t work because Nx5h+ Gx5h Sx6g+.

On move 47. G*7g was better to keep your escape route of 6h-square.

On move 48. This is a common move. It’s a simple threat but hard for Black to defend.

On move 61. Great swindle! White could go wrong with Gx7a and+Rx7a Kx7a G*6b K8b Gx7b Kx7b R*6b K7a +L6a

On move 67. You achieved a double attack but now the opponent’s king is kind of safe.

Overall

You were doing great in the opening. I can see you’ve learned some opening theory and tactics!

unfortunately, it seems like you weren’t able to maximize your abilities because of your insecure king safety. You took the opponent’s decisive blow out of nowhere and then it became kind of one-sided endgame. But don’t get too disappointed that happens even to strong players when you’re too behind in King safety.

to avoid falling victim to opponent’s decisive moves, pay extra attention to your king safety, especially when you develop boat castle against Mino castle. Double checking if you’re overlooking opponent’s attacking moves would be helpful.

key takeaways from the game are the moves B*3c on move 37 and S8h on move 41. These moves are particularly applicable.

If you have any questions about my feedback, you can ask one time only.